I NEED YOUR OPINIONS!
As i have explained in my previous post: This is a LOGO that i have designed for my new Computers Co/Shop! This LOGO is created from a "Persian" word (Rokh) that it means FACE!
How do u like the LOGO? Is it any good? Any thoughts about this? #LOGO #GTribers #HELP
PS: Made some changes as guys requested,removed the box and used more dark colors! (Colors are changable) and the difference between colors (a part is darker than another part) is because the persian word meaning, it is… See More
2 different words! Like R and KH...
Try experimenting with colors and combine them,then try it on different backgrounds like what Davor said. Also, use colors that could give some appeal and reflection to your company's mission.
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I read through all the comments here and I simply have to say that Davor's suggestion on playing with thickness is absolutely your best way to make this friendly and easy to understand by anyone's eyes. The way you write in this language should tell where to add thickness and where is should thin. I challenge you to grab a paint brush, black paint, and white copy paper and just draw this exact logo out with accurate, but quick strokes. Try it a few times and show us your favorite one. I think you'll… See More
be amazed how cool it's going to end up looking.
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here for your inspiration
siahdesign.com/archives/847
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much better than before
but it's still missing something
read this articel for your logo referene
designshack.net/articles/inspiration/10-tips-for-designing-logos-that-dont-suck
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Idea is good. But: how logo looks in B/W? how logo looks on different color backgrounds? This eye(dot): i'd like eye contour similar to real eye. Eyebrows: straighter lines without this endings. Lines: i'll would play with thickness. So the overall look of logo gives brush drawn feeling.
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cool project but imho i need to be able to read your language to give proper advice. to me who do not understand your language, it only is a drawing that makes no sense besides looking a bit like a face. i did study design and in my opinion i would concentrate on an image first, and the letters last. this is more calligraphy than a logotipe. images usually are more impacting for the brain. but again, i dont think i know enough of your language to have any opinion on this subject have fun
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that Shayan is for the copyright things ahahahahahahaha
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I'm going to be honest and say I don't like it. But I'm from a part of the world with a very different tradition within design. A tradition that would not put text infront of the logo so both become harder to read, shadow would probably not ever be used and the font used for the face has both hard square and round edges and have too much white empty space. I however have close to no idea how it would work in Iran - it could be perfect there
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